Marilyn Manson – Sweet Dreams tab ver. 2

Guitar 2(rythum guitar) Sorry if i messed up on the tabs at all this is my first 
tab...if there are any mistakes can you tell me? thx.

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E|---------------------------------------------|G|---------------------------------------------|B|-------------5-5-(x8)------------------------|D|-------------3-3-(x8)------------------------|A|-6-(x18)-5-5----------6-(x7)/5/6-(x8)-5-(x7)-|E|-4-(x18)-3-3----------4-(x7)/3/4-(x8)-3-(x7)-|
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E|----------------------------|G|----------------------------|B|----------------------------|D|----5--6--5-----------------| x4A|-3-3--3--3--3----6/8---5/6--|E|--------------4-4---3-3-----|
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E|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------|G|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------|B|-------------5-5-(x8)----------------------------------------------------------|D|-------------3-3-(x8)----------------------------------------------------------|A|-6-(x18)-5-5----------6-(x7)/5/6-(x8)-5-(x7)-6-(x8)-5-(x8)-6-(x8)-5/1-3/1--0---|E|-4-(x18)-3-3----------4-(x7)/3/4-(x8)-3-(x7)-4-(x8)-3-(x8)-4-(x8)-5/1-3/1------|-0-|
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