Porcupine Tree – Occams Razor tab

This is my first tab, I probably need to work on the formatting a bit but everything 
sounds correct to me.

E|--0-0-0-0|B|--3-3-3-3|G|--2-2-2-2| let ring (x2)D|--0-0-0-0|A|--0-0-0-0|D|--0-0-0-0|
E|--0-0-0-4|B|--3-3-3-3|G|--2-2-2-2| let ring long(x1)D|--0-0-0-0|A|--0-0-0-0|D|--0-0-0-0|
This part is on an acoustic guitar but it can be played on electric as well:
E|--44-4-44--------00-0-00|B|--55-5-55--------11-1-11|G|--66-6-66--------22-2-22|D|--00-0-00--------33-3-33|A|--00-0-00--------00-0-00|D|--xx-x-xx--------xx-x-xx|
And then back to the starting riff:
E|--0-0-0-0|B|--3-3-3-3|G|--2-2-2-2| let ring (x1)D|--0-0-0-0|A|--0-0-0-0|D|--0-0-0-0|
E|--0-0-0-4|B|--3-3-3-3|G|--2-2-2-2| let ring long (x1)D|--0-0-0-0|A|--0-0-0-0|D|--0-0-0-0|
((Electronic sound effects)
E|------------|B|------------|G|------------|D|------------| with reverb (x2)A|-------/8-/4|D|-1-0--------|
The next part is played a little differently and the first A at 5th is played a bit short.
E|----------------|B|----------------|G|----------------|D|----------------| with reverb (x2) fade outA|-------5-5/8-8/4|D|-1-1-0----------|
Questions and comments are welcome, feel free to give suggestions on the tab or formatting.
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