Alesana – Curse Of The Virgin Canvas tab ver. 3

Artist: Alesana
Song: Curse of the Virgin Canvas
Album: The Emptiness 2010
This is only the rhythm part of the song. It sounds really close to me. Let me know what 
think of my fisrt tab. =]

e|---------------------------------------------|B|---------------------------------------------|G|---------------------------------------------|D|-0----10--7--8----10---0----10--7--8----10---|A|-0----10--7--8----10---0----10--7--8----10---|D|-0----10--7--8----10---0----10--7--8----10---|
This is a nightmare...e|------------------------------|B|------------------------------|G|-7--7-7-7-7-7\5---------------|D|-x--x-x-x-x-x\x--5------7-----|A|-5--5-5-5-5-5\3--5-x16--7-x16-|D|-----------------5------7-----|
Her body teases me...e|----------------------------------|B|----------------------------------|G|-7--7-7-7-7-7\5-------------------|D|-x--x-x-x-x-x\x--5------7----8----|A|-5--5-5-5-5-5\3--5-x16--7-x8-8-x8-|D|-----------------5------7----8----|
My angel lie to me...e|-------------------------------------------------------|B|-------------------------------------------------------|G|-------------------------------------------------------|D|-0----10--7--8--5-----7-----0----10--7--8--5-----7-----|A|-0----10--7--8--5-x16-7-x16-0----10--7--8--5-x16-7-x16-|D|-0----10--7--8--5-----7-----0----10--7--8--5-----7-----|
Sweet revente...e|-----------------------|B|-----------------------|G|-----------------------|D|-8---8---8---8---0-----|A|-8---8---8---8---0-x18-|D|-8---8---8---8---0-----|
empty eyes accuse...e|-----------------------|B|-----------------------|G|-----------------------|D|-7----7--5--3----5-----|A|-7----7--5--3----5-x16-|D|-7----7--5--3----5-----|
So terribly memory returns...e|----------------------------------------------|B|----------------------------------------------|G|----------------------------------------------|D|-7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-|A|-7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-|D|-7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7--7-7-|
e|----------------------------------------------|B|----------------------------------------------|G|----------------------------------------------|D|-3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-|A|-3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-|D|-3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-3-3--3-3-|
e|----------------------------------------------|B|----------------------------------------------|G|----------------------------------------------|D|-5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-|A|-5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-|D|-5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-5-5--5-5-|
My angel lie to me...e|-------------------------------------------------------|B|-------------------------------------------------------|G|-------------------------------------------------------|D|-0----10--7--8--5-----7-----0----10--7--8--5-----7-----|A|-0----10--7--8--5-x16-7-x16-0----10--7--8--5-x16-7-x16-|D|-0----10--7--8--5-----7-----0----10--7--8--5-----7-----|
Sweet revenge...e|---------------|B|---------------|G|---------------|D|-8---8---0-----|A|-8---8---0-x18-|D|-8---8---0-----|
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