Alesana – A Gilded Masquerade tab ver. 2

Hey!

Here's A Gilded Masquerade's solo by Alesana. 
Feel free to comment if something's wrong. :)
Would anyone help me with the first part? I don't think this is right...

Guitar 1

e|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|B|----------------------9---9---9---9-----------------------10---10---10---10-|G|--9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6---6---6---6---6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6----6----6----6----|D|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|A|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|D|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
Guitar 1
e|-----------------------------------------|B|-----------------------------------------|G|-5h6-5h6-5h6-6~---8--9~--8h9-8~----------|D|-----------------------------------------|A|-----------------------------------------|D|-----------------------------------------|
OCTAVES :D Guitar 2
e|-8h9-8h9-8h9-9~---11--12~--11h12-11~-----|B|-----------------------------------------|G|-----------------------------------------|D|-----------------------------------------|A|-----------------------------------------|D|-----------------------------------------|
[REPEAT THE FIRST PART] Guitar 1
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------|B|-----------------------------------------------------------------|G|-5h6-5h6-5h6-6~---8--9~--8h9-8~---5h6-5h6-5h6-6~--8-8~-6~--------|D|-----------------------------------------------------------------|A|-----------------------------------------------------------------|D|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
Guitar 2
e|-8h9-8h9-8h9-9~---11--12~--11h12-11~---8h9-8h9-8h9-9~--11-11~-9~----|B|--------------------------------------------------------------------|G|--------------------------------------------------------------------|D|--------------------------------------------------------------------|A|--------------------------------------------------------------------|D|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
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