Bring Me The Horizon – Slow Dance tab ver. 2

Learnt this song by ear so tabs might not be 100% correct - please tell me if i have 
made any mistakes :)

/ = slide up to
. (under line) = palm mute
( ) = artificial harmonic
h = hammer on
p = pull off

|----------------------| |----------------------| |----------------------|00:00|----------------------| |--8----/12--10--------| x2 |-----------------11---|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------| |----------------------------------------------------------------------| |----------------------------------------------------------------------|00:13|----------------------------------------------------15--12----11--11--| |-5h8p5[x10]--8h12p8[x5]--7h10p7[x5]------------------x--x-----x--x----| |-------------------------------------8h11p8[x10]--0-12--12--0-8--8----|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------| |----------------------------------------------------------------------| |----------------------------------------------------------------------|00:20|----------------------------------------------------15----------------| |-5h8p5[x10]--8h12p8[x5]--7h10p7[x5]-----------------x-----------------| |-------------------------------------8h11p8[x10]--0-12-0-0[dive bomb]-|
|-------------------------------------------------------| |-------------------------------------------------------| |-------------------------------------------------------|00:27|-------------------------------------------------------| |---------------12-----10----8---8---8------------------| |--0-0-0-12-0-0----0-0-----0---0---0----0-0-0-11-12-14--|
. . . . . . . . . . . . . x2 --------------------------------------------------------| --------------------------------------------------------| --------------------------------------------------------| -----------------------------------------15-15---11-11--| ---------------12-----10----8---8---8-----x--x----x-x---| --0-0-0-12-0-0----0-0-----0---0---0----0-12-12--0-8-8---| . . . . . . . . . .
|--------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------------------------------(10)--|00:40|--0-0-0-0------0----0-0-0-0-0-0-0------15-15---11-------| |--0-0-0-0------0----0-0-0-0-0-0-0-------x--x----x-------| x2 |--0-0-0-0------0----0-0-0-0-0-0-0----0-12-12--0-8-------| . . . . . . . . . . . .
|--------------------------| |--------------------------| |--------------------------|00:53|--0-0-0-0-----------------| |--0-0-0-0-----------------| |--0-0-0-0---0[dive bomb]--| . . . .
|-------------------------------------------------------------------| |-------------------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------------------------------------------(10)-|00:57|---------------------------------------------------15-15---11------| |-5h8p5[x10]--8h12p8[x5]--7h10p7[x5]-----------------x--x----x------| x2 |------------------------------------8h11p8[x10]--0-12-12--0-8------|
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