Eisley - Ten Cent Blues tab

This is my first tab so its probably not 100% correct. I would greatly appreciate any 
criticism.
Heres a video of the way I play it : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nznmbovbjcA

Tabbed by: David Gil
Email: gdnimrodgd15@gmail.com

Tuning: Standard

G# A#m C#e|--4- e|--1-- e|-------|B|--4- B|--2-- B|--6----|G|--5- G|--3-- G|--6----|D|--6- D|--3-- D|--6----|A|--6- A|--1-- A|--4----|E|---- E|----- E|-------|
Intro:
e|------6-------8-------10-----------10---8--6-8-----10--8--6-8---------------|B|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|G|--5/7----7/9-----9/11-------------------------------------------------------|D|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|A|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|E|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
e|-----6---8-8---10-10----5-5---6-6-----------------------------------------|B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|D|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|A|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|E|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G# Dear orthodox,
 A#m C# I can't control my feelings,
 A#m And who hit me? 
 C# I just might be
 Coming round the bush 
 C# A#m And my stilts, they began cracking 
C# Subsequently pushed
 G# 
And I looked to see that it was she
 A#m Just some abandoned little crook like me
 C# A#m Adieu, adieu, and fare thee well 
C# This was the ending, please 

G# A#m Oh, whoa... C# A#m I was attached on bended knee
 C# But I declined my leave

 But who could blame
 A fraction of her being?
 She is cheesy, she is scrawny
 With her uncanny styling 
I'm teasing, she is pleasing
 She just has no wit

 And I'm sorry I don't have her face 
And I'm probably gonna lose this race
 There is no doubt she's such a mouse
 With such an abstract grace

 Oh, whoa... 
There is no cure, I am sure 
For these ten cent blues

 N.C And then she chose to dissect me N.C 
And I was casted into poverty
 C# A#m But I did not agree with her
 C# She said, "Now, you've got nerve,"
 ^The chords in that verse sound good if you start low and build the volume up But I don't care if I'm granted 
For all these things 
If I were one among this crowd 
Would you call that defeat?

*The chords and strumming change a bit here G# A#me|--4--------6------|B|--4--------6------|G|--5--------6------|D|------------------|A|------------------|E|------------------|
G# A#m (Right here she hammers on the B and G strings, play with it)
 In a way it's making me crazy 
G# A#m In a sense that it's making me stronger
 G# A#m A likely chance, and it's probably proven 
G# A#m In the end we'll all walk away
 *back to previous chords and strumming G# Shaking hands on the doormat 
 A#m I salute you, sir 
 C# A#m A stranger and a happy fit 
C# I'm glad I'm part of it
 G# A#m C# And that I saw it all I believe the outro is the same as the intro. Hope this was helpful. If you have any suggestions please let me know.
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