Eyes Set To Kill - A Sketch In Black And White tab version 2

Please don't get mad if it sounds nothing like it, I'm just improvising so that someone 
maybe get a clue of how it goes off this, please send corrections. And c'mon insults are 
so only compliments and corrections please.

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|B|---------------------------------------------------------------|G|-10^---7^-----10^----7^-----10^----7^----10^----7^-------------|D|----7^----7^------7^----7^------7^----7^-----7^----7^----------|A|---------------------------------------------------------------|E|---------------------------------------------------------------|
e|----------------------------------------------|B|----------------------------------------------|G|-7/10/13-13-10-9-----13-10-9-----9-10-13-15---|D|-----------------7/9---------7/9--------------|A|----------------------------------------------|E|----------------------------------------------|
e|------------------------------------------------------------------|B|------------------------------------------------------------------|G|-13-10-9---9-10-13-13-10-9---9-10-13-13-10-9---9-10-13-13-10-9----|D|---------7-----------------7-----------------7-----------------7--|A|------------------------------------------------------------------|(x3)E|------------------------------------------------------------------|
On the ending let the last note ring. Please send corrections cuz I know it's nowhere near 100% correct, but don't reject it please because I want more people to see it and correct it. Thank you :D
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