Piston – Grey Flap tab

My first Tab ever! I think it´s pretty correct, please tell me if it´s not. Love 
Tune down to C# (1.5 steps down) It´s not complete (The part where Val sings is missing), but 
improve!

Any notes or corrections? hanswuerstel@googlemail.com

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time never was as they are for me
im happiest in a world full over error
time breaks my heart chnaged my soul again this time my friend

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excuse im wrong C#5 E5 but i need some encouraging B5 F#5 thank you for being so bold E5 F#5 C#5/E5 <----Slide to E5 so catch me when i fall C#5 E5 so i need your touch beside me B5 F#5 thank you for being so bold E5 F#5 C#5/E5 <----Slide to E5 and armed with your look that's my fault i see and safe in your world. full of time full of pressure time breaks my heart chnaged my soul again this time my friend
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