Velvet Revolver – American Man tab

Hi guys, First tab :).More to come hopefully.
This is the way I play American Man, see what you think of it rate it, comment on it,
 tell me if you think its good or bad, whatever.
I think this tab is correct but not intierly sure.

Interlude:

E------------------------------------------------------------|B------------------------------------------------------------|G---11~~~~---------------------------------------------------|D------------------------------------------------------------|A--------6h-7h-9-----10~~--9--7~~--6~~----9~~-------9---9----|E-------------------7-------------------7----------7---7-----|
E-------------------------------------------------------------------------------|B---------------------------------------------------------7--10--7--10--12~~----|G-----------------------------------------------7-----9--7----------------------|D------------------------------------------7--9---9--7--------------------------|A-6--7--9-----10b^--9p7---9s7--6----9--9s---------------------------------------|E----------7---------------------7----------------------------------------------|
This is the way I play the verse i think it is correct.
e|--------------------------|G|--------------------------|B|--------------------------|D|-9----------9--------9----|A|-6----------6--------6----|E|-7--7-7-7-7-7--7--7--7--7-|
e|--------------------------|G|--------------------------|B|--------------------------|D|-9----------9--------9----|A|-9----------9--------9----|E|-7--7-7-7-7-7--7--7--7--7-|
e|--------------------------|G|--------------------------|B|--------------------------|D|-9----------9--------9----|A|-7----------7--------7----|E|-7--7-7-7-7-7--7--7--7--7-|
e|--------------------------|G|--------------------------|B|--------------------------|D|-9----------9--------9----|A|10---------10-------10----|E|-7--7-7-7-7-7--7--7--7--7-|
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